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You should make it a loop :)

Wow, great animation :) You do know how to make a animate smoothly.
One thing I didn't like was that it were like "pauses" after the characters spoke and such, which made everything a bit stiff, even though the animation wasn't.
You can see the same problem in the first Family Guy episodes. But now, they don't have that problem anymore, and everything feels more natural :) I hope you'll learn to make the animations natural too, because then your animations will be flawless... truly flawless :3

It's was okay :) Nice animated and such, but everything seemed a bit too random.
7.5/10 :)

I like the art, and the music. But there is too many tweens :(

daigonite responds:

I tend to use tweens, like in my last one. I'm working on cleaning them up, but I quite like how they look actually...

Well...

A good loop + good music always equals to win ;)
I loved that bird that looked like a square xD

TheBoogley responds:

THANKS!! :D
poor old square bird, it looks painful for him to walk... :v

Not so good...

Stiff animation, and just not so interesting story :(
But nice idea 'bout be abel to change the story.
Keep'on animating :D

Another ASDF movie copy?

1) Find something original to do.
2) Get a good sense of humor!
3) Randomness is not fun, unless you'll make it fun.
4) Please dude xD It seems like your an allright animator. Just get a good animation-idea x)

Not so good...

I gave you 4.
This is the reasons:
1) Not so good humor :)
2) The animation is not so good. I think you already know that, but I can't give you a good score.
3) Sooo many tweeeeens o.0
4) The lines around their heads is too big.
5) Sometimes you use real backgrounds, and sometimes not... chose!

I hope you thought my review was helpfull, BYE!!!
Keep on animating :D

Twisted4000 responds:

Motion tweens are a lot easier to use than constantly redrawing everything... I started using them a ton when I got tired of making it after 4 months. I sometimes use pictures for backgrounds because it's difficult drawing desks and putting them all on separate layers, along with drawing people BEHIND the desks. The drawing is a style. No one really has a right to complain about the drawings too much, maybe the animation, but for drawings, some people just draw certain ways.

It was fun!

Randomness is fun :)
But what song is it in the end of the movie? (credits song?)

Good but...

Good but... you stole jokes from other places :(
Like the "no brain zombie"-joke is from The Simpssons.
Other then that it was pretty good :D

RogerregoRRoger responds:

I didn't really steal it from the simpsons, but it is a pretty obvious joke so I'm sure it's been done before.
it was more the hole in the ground that was the centerpiece and the "no brain" the only way I knew how to end the sketch with a punchline.

Thanks.

Hi, I'm Charlie, an animator & game developer from Sweden. Here on Newgrounds you can find some of my stuff.
My website is: www.charlieraud.se

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